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Entries in editing (18)

Saturday
Jun242017

Comic: Canine Assistant

Wednesday
May312017

Why you should always proofread your email one last time.

Tuesday
Sep062016

Comic: Bad Dog.

Tuesday
Aug092016

Comic: Comma Abuse

Friday
May132016

Comic: Why you should always proofread your email one last time before hitting SEND

Wednesday
Sep092015

Something Amazing

Thanks to my friend Therese Walsh for the great caption! You can find out more about Therese at ThereseWalsh.com and on Twitter at @ThereseWalsh.

 

Monday
Feb232015

Comic: Taking Punctuation Personally

Friday
Dec122014

Comic: He's Checking It Twice...Just Not Yet

Wednesday
Nov122014

Comic: Another Reason You Should Always Make Backups

Friday
Nov072014

Comic: Over-Editing And Submission Avoidance Support Group

 

(Edited March 27, 2018: I have modified the comic because although some in the OCD community liked the original "Obsessive Compulsive Editing Disorder Support Group" comic, some found the OCD reference hurtful. I apologize to anyone who was offended; it was never my intention. - Debbie)

To writers out there: so 'fess up. How many of you out there can identify?

Monday
Aug252014

Writers: Don't rush your submission. Make sure your writing is polished BEFORE you send it out. 

One mistaken assumption that I've noticed some newbie writers making: Sending out their writing too soon, assuming that the editor who buys their short story (or novel, etc.) is going to be helping them polish the piece anyway.

DO NOT DO THIS.

Never, ever send an mss out just after you've finished it. Put it away for a few days (a few weeks at least, for a novel). That way you'll be able to reread more objectively, without the rosy glow of "omigosh this is brilliant just wait until publishers see this."

I'm a foodie, so often think in terms of food analogies. In this case, it would be sort of like a first-time restauranteur opening before they've perfected their dishes. Turn off the restaurant critics early on, and you make it tougher for yourself longterm.

If you're a new picture book writer, this is even MORE vital. Why? Because I've noticed that many non-pb writers assume that writing a picture book is easy because there are fewer words, that it's something they can do on the side for extra money while they work on their "real" books. 

Vaguely related side note:

Others may differ, but I also advise NOT giving it to your critique group to read too soon. Why? Because there is a real value in getting feedback from someone who is reading the piece for the first time. Yes, there's a value in getting feedback for a rough version so you can polish it before sending it out to an editor. Be aware, however, that after the first critique, your crit partners will likely be giving feedback on your revisions rather than an overall first-time impression.

Respect your readers, before and after publication.

Thursday
Jan102013

Comic: The Plot Hole

Wednesday
Aug082012

Comic: Revision Angst

RevisionAngst

Thanks to Writers Write Creative Blog for making this particular comic so popular on Facebook right now. :-)

I'm posting some of my older comics here as I catalog and tag them in prep for a print book compilation. You can find my comics for writers on Inkygirl (http://inkygirl.com), Tumblr (http://inkygirl.tumblr.com) and Pinterest (http://pinterest.com/inkyelbows/comics-for-writers-inkygirl-com)

Wednesday
Apr182012

Comic: Cat and Dog Editors

Monday
Feb142011

NaNoEdMo - National Novel Editing Month

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I was reading this post in Writer Unboxed and thought I'd remind you all about National Novel Editing Month.

Looking for motivation to edit your manuscript? Check out NaNoEdiMo, which is a challenge to writers to spend 50 hours in March editing your novel.

An excerpt from the site:

You have entered the portal to the crazy world of novel editing. Have you written a 50,000 word novel but haven't edited it yet? Then you've come to the right place! It is here that people from all over the world gather together to spend 50 hours in March editing their novels. This is not as easy as it might sound but the forums are available to get advice and ask all the important questions you may have. Advice from real published authors will also be here to help you and a certificate of completion awaits each winner at the end of the month.

URL: http://www.nanoedmo.net/xoops2/

Tuesday
Nov302010

Comic: Serious Line Editing

Scholastic editor Cheryl Klein (Arthur Levine Books) has an excellent post about her 3-step line editing process: A Mid-Line-Edit Ramble e On Line-Editing.

Wednesday
Nov242010

Comic: What they're really thinking

Thursday
Jun242010

Writers: avoid these clichés like the plague!

(Update: link fixed -- sorry about that!)

If you want to keep your writing from sounding too predictable, read this post by Delia Cabe from Boston.com about over-used pet words, phrases and devices.